Last week we planned, researched and created documentaries about deforestation. We worked in groups of 3 and had a number of different roles. These were scribe, presenter, camera, expert and editor. We created a storyboard plan, wrote a script and then filmed the presenter's parts of the documentary. Finally we selected music and photos and edited the videos together. These are our completed documentaries. What do you think?
I thought JK was a really enthusiastic presenter and he and the expert had some great information. You could improve it by showing the whole clips of the presenter
ReplyDeleteI really liked L.O's group's facts and I wish they could have more photos.
ReplyDeleteJKS GROUP WAS AMAZING!!!
ReplyDeleteTHIS WAS THE BEST DOCUMENRY I HAVE EVER SEEN I THINK YOU NEED TO PUT THE CAMRA SHOULD BE SOME WHERE LIGHT SO YOU CAN SEE THE PRESENTER
ReplyDeletemj was a brilliant presenter in the documentry.
ReplyDeletewhen he said this is the chopped down tree.
what you need to improve is a louder voice.
jk group was amazing I think you could improve it by being a little less angrier from roche
ReplyDeletethis is awesome
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ReplyDeletevery good vid
ReplyDeletejk was good and bad
ReplyDeleteI think JKwas a good prosentrer but shouid be a bit calmer.They gave some good facts.
ReplyDeletejks was good
ReplyDeletestar:I liked Jks voice because it was loud and clear plus there was
ReplyDeleteintresting facts about his documentary and with the interveiw.
wish:You can improve by putting your camera where you can see your face make sure you dont make it from one thing to the other suddenly
Great documentaries guys!
ReplyDeleteI love how you have included music and photos to make them more interesting. I also think that it's great that you have used comments to offer advice.
Well done for remembering that you should never use someone's name if you are commenting on a photo or video of them- Super E Safety!
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ReplyDeletemm was good
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